After doing the argumentative essay i feel that i need to improve so many things. first of all, i need to improve my format in the argumentative essay. I put my thesis statement in the wrong place, should be in the second paragraph and also i put some facts in my essay but i forgot to put the reference list in the end of the essay, and all of my mistake that i did in my argumentative essay affect my score, even though i got low score, Ms. Hoddinott help me to improve my skills in doing the argumentative essay and i will keep trying to do my best.
After getting a low score in the argumentative essay, i got a good score for my debate. I feel happy because i got good score (22/24). Well i don't know where's the other 2 score, maybe i did some little mistake while in the debate, but the debate was very fun! I really like the debate. My group did well, and our point was "Globalization will not lead us to a brighter future".
